ahhhh yesssssss...the good old daze...eight ball in the corner pocket -- "Game over, rack 'em up, Everett!!!" ~duke the drifter~
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Certainly this is vivid!
Too bad I myself am a sworn-off alcoholic (12 years sober)... this poem leaves me feeling bad. Of course, that being said, you have succeeded!
Bye for now,
Richard Vallance Janke
Ottawa, Ontario,
Canada
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Ahh now, i'd be saying a mis spent youth if i was to agree with you here, but apart from saying very well done for a very well crafted poem, i'm saying nothing...except of course, that was a while back and my manners have improved somewhat since then lol...take care and well done...Mark ...
A real slice of life...and one I can relate to...except for the brawls...no, wait now...guess that fits too!
Thanks for the smile and the memories...great write!
Too bad I myself am a sworn-off alcoholic (12 years sober)... this poem leaves me feeling bad. Of course, that being said, you have succeeded!
Bye for now,
Richard Vallance Janke
Ottawa, Ontario,
Canada
Regards
DJ.
(Proprietor of the Cramelot Inn
of the Author's Round Table.)
Melanie
Thanks for the smile and the memories...great write!
This is a VERY GOOD, WELL WRITTEN and SPLENDID REAL LIFE IMAGERY!
~Nikki~
excellent write
William
Reindeer
I remember them all so well. Thanks for the memories! Great Write!
tony