Poetess,
I have read about half of your story. I will continue later when I have more time to spend. so far I have been spellbound and intrigued with your story. I have only one critique, when you are writing the poem sections, it is just a bit too small to read for me anyway. I am having trouble reading some of the words. Perhaps it is the script of these poems that you chose, not sure or the size of the letters. Just a critique, otherwise you have written an amazing story! Keep on writing you are very talented!
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
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Karen
Sandie Angel :o)
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Christine
Very well done, indeed.
God bless.
I have read about half of your story. I will continue later when I have more time to spend. so far I have been spellbound and intrigued with your story. I have only one critique, when you are writing the poem sections, it is just a bit too small to read for me anyway. I am having trouble reading some of the words. Perhaps it is the script of these poems that you chose, not sure or the size of the letters. Just a critique, otherwise you have written an amazing story! Keep on writing you are very talented!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Sage
while I walk mine and we can let peace find its time.