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Lemon Drops
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Sweet and Sour

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Her shaking hands inched across the kitchen table top
Certain of their mission but detouring along the way
Her fading vision showed her the ghostly outline
Of the old glass bowl and finally she reached in
She retrieved a single lemon drop and slowly unraveled
The crinkling cellophane wrapper and placed the drop
On the center of her tongue, her favorite spot
The sweet taste tickled her cheeks and then
The sour flavor joined in making her lips pucker
A tiny reminiscent smile crossed her face
Then a tear fell, just one, and then one more
She closed her eyes and leaned back
Against the old lemon tree
Harry was right there beside her
She held his hand and they savored the scent
Of the lemon blossoms floating
On the warm spring air
As a jaybird scolded them for their intrusion
He stroked her hair and gently kissed her forehead
While the bees hummed about seeking nectar
And as the evening drew near and the sun began to set
The sea breeze rustled through the branches
And they watched as nature’s cycle ran its course
As the older lemons began to fall from the tree
To make way for the new
Lemon drops, one by one
Her shaking hands inched across the kitchen table top
She retrieved a single drop and placed it on her tongue
The sour taste lingered as tears fell, one by one
 
 
 
 

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 Reviews of "Lemon Drops"
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Beautiful link between taste and memory, carefully expressed.

Axilea

Reviewed on November 12, 2009
Beautiful images, just beautiful. So nostalgic and sweet.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on November 12, 2009
Absolutely captivating! Beautifully done, Patrick...bravo!

Anna

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
my favorite scent,an exquisetly detailed poem, Patrick,
portraying colorful images that bring the story to life...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
A poetic masterpiece from beginning to end, it is a captivating write..

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
It is so very true that a certain taste, a particular piece of music, a scent etc... can evoke so much within one's self, Patrick. You have shared a compelling offering. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Now, come here and drop some of that stuff on my rum...and after you do that, please, in a low voice read this poem to me as I close my eyes and put my back against my imaginary lemon tree...

Georg


Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Damn, you're on a roll Patrick! Great stuff lately...the whole spectrum. This is very well done. Keep it up. When you're hot, you're hot!!!!

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Life and memories well captured.
I like this a lot.

John


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