She promised
herself their's was but a moments
interlude-a random consideration
in the brink of discussion and
dinner drinks.
Love the construct of this sassy write, Donna - the line-breaks which conjure the pauses for thought and the ... elipses. Very coool and neat conclusion. So very true and lifelike! Makes me think of the iceberg and the 7/8 that goes unseen... or, as here, unspoken. TY Kate xx
a very vivid capture i could visualize quite clearly ...
ah, the perceptions of the heart ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
As with all relationships the friction of distrust complicates matters...we don't spend enough time getting to know each other.
and we are too picky!;-)Excellent poem Donna!
This leaves a lot to the readers imagination as you wonder at this designation and secret tryst, is it a lover, a brother, a friend or perhaps someone she has never met....
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herself their's was but a moments
interlude-a random consideration
in the brink of discussion and
dinner drinks.
Love the construct of this sassy write, Donna - the line-breaks which conjure the pauses for thought and the ... elipses. Very coool and neat conclusion. So very true and lifelike! Makes me think of the iceberg and the 7/8 that goes unseen... or, as here, unspoken. TY Kate xx
Love Tinka
Enjoyed
Love & peace
William
ah, the perceptions of the heart ...
and we are too picky!;-)Excellent poem Donna!
Love,
Eileen
Joselyn
nice work Donna.....Art Sun....
Fee
Thanks
Dan