Amazing piece of poetry! I didn't detect the back-and-forth tryst, but it did seem as 'tho the poet (one) would stop...then restart later. Your explanation below gives an insight into the title.
One question...does the line "engaged? rogovin? alas..." refer to the famed photographer M. Rogovin?
This reality of war and occupation stemming from its roots of long ago sends the cries of occupation that even now festers within the minds and souls of those who suffer along the path of repetitions....
nice work on this piece...
Art Sun.....
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2007
Interesting pen,Hugs
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
If we had the same will power to follow Churchill..............History which we all now regret...
One question...does the line "engaged? rogovin? alas..." refer to the famed photographer M. Rogovin?
Micke
"the socialist epic
drawn up through the billows
to suit a man's credo. the
ring never on the right or
left hand long enough to
grasp its real meaning."
These lines are very powerful and thought provoking.
Interesting work, in my opinion and good choice of form for this content.
Axilea
quite unique I must say :)
vesna
nice work on this piece...
Art Sun.....
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