I am mesmerized by the power of this pen - memorable lines - exquisitely penned - my new favorite of yours - saving this one to get lost in, again and again -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Someone lusted? I guess all us men and women are
guilty of that, Taking action would be the wrong
thing maybe?
You have a neat style
Ron
I love the cadence of this and the way the writer reaches out but also directs her images to the reader, I cannot speak for others but I think most males will feel this one deeply and search back to see if they are guilty of past victimization. Very nice write indeed.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
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This read gave me thought to love's passions & then to a betrayal, and forgiveness as you so well stated in your last stanza.
Embrasse'
Vickie
Newfie Hugs, Rose
I am mesmerized by the power of this pen - memorable lines - exquisitely penned - my new favorite of yours - saving this one to get lost in, again and again -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
guilty of that, Taking action would be the wrong
thing maybe?
You have a neat style
Ron
Be always safe,
Karen
Fee