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The Reality of His Hell
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*The Reality of His Hell* Outside, looking in at the Dark, deepest shadows of His tormented mind. A well built wall of scars Destroying the reality Of his dreams. Inner words of pain Convulse deeply inside Hurting and destroying. Visions of a loss Burned deeply within His young heart. Death of love and End of hope drowning This innocent child. Destroying his only light Ending tomorrow’s glory Silencing once more. Many offer words of Prayer and learned wisdom. Worthless and meaningless That’s all he will ever feel. Words with no promises That’s all he’ll ever believe. Inner words cut harder And, dig deeper within This tormented soul. Draining life’s meaning And, slowly bleeding away What little, if any he has left. He feels protected by The strength of his wall. Tools of time keep failing to Chisel away at his scars. Keeping him a prisoner The reality of his hell. Deborah Ann Tornillo Copyright© 2009

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Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on September 4, 2009

Hopefully from desolation, will come consulation and some kind of acceptance. Its hard when a person keeps getting dragged down with no hope in sight. It can reduce the will to go on , it can bring , anger, fear, frustration, hopelessness to a person. I pray you'll both have the strength to endure whats ahead. The path is a steep one and it won't be easy. Some times I think a person can only go so far down , and then they have to rise up, accept and live the best they can with the time thats given to them,and perhaps leave something of them selves behind , to be remembered for... Your poem shows all the inner emotins , fear , turmoil, and hoplessness of his situation. My continued heart felt prayers are with you both....M

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Powerful. Liz

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

I think you capture the horrors of the condition perfectly. My heat goes out to you.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

...WORTHLESS AND MEANINGLESS...WORDS WITH NO PROMISES...THAT'S ALL HE'LL EVER 'BELIEVE'... AT TIMES LIKE THESE IT IS SO HARD FOR THE SICK TO SEE 'HIM'...TO BELIEVE THAT HE STILL HOLDS OUR HAND. MAY GOD STRENGTHEN YOU, THE CARE GIVER, AS YOU CONTINUE TO PRAY FOR HIM. GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

This one hurts - powerfully penned sadness, Deborah.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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