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A Soul
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A Soul

 

Hiding amongst

The shadows

Of a broken heart

Lives a soul

Torn apart.

 

Blistered and

Burned by Death’s

Blinding rays

Fear of tomorrow

Remain today.

 

Peering through

The crevasses of

Hope and faith

Reality slaps her

Back into place.

 

Rays of sunshine

Happiness and Joy

Once trusted

And, vital

Not anymore.

 

Deborah Ann Tornillo

Copyright© 2010


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 Reviews of "A Soul"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 2, 2010
Heart touching Deborah. I've been to that place too, but always know, "the sun will shine again"...Love...M

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
Some words from Psalm 42 come to mind..."My tears have been my food day and night, while they continually say unto me, 'Where is thy God?'
Why art thou cast down, O my soul? And why art thou disquieted in me? Hope thou in God; for I shall yet praise Him for the help of His countenance.
"O my God my soul is cast down within me; therefore will I remember Thee from....." Here he remembers times when God did seem near.
In the last verse, he repeats verse 5 with one difference: "Why art thou cast down, O my soul? And why art thou disquieted within me? Hope thou in God; for I shall yet praise Him, who is the health of my countenance, and my God."
I pray that God will renew your faith daily, and help you and your husband to know Him more deeply and feel His love moment by moment.
Connie

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
SAD...POOR SOUL. YOU KNOW ME DEBORAH, I AM ALL ABOUT JESUS...HE JUST DOESN'T LET US GIVE UP. TO ME, THIS IS A POOR SOUL THAT DESPERATELY NEEDS JESUS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
Fine work, Deborah

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 22, 2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on April 21, 2010
Wow, I keep looking at the 5 last lines.
I imagine what they are to you, I know what they are to me.
It is as if I have been so stuck there.
The words, "Move on" echo around me- but I stay there.
I may, at last, be finding some clues for my escape.
Thanks for sharing, much to ponder.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 21, 2010
The connection between the spiritual soul and the romantic heart is often queried and wondered about and your heartbreak story is all the more intense because of this. It makes one asks such questions as is the heart truly capable of feeling or just a mechanical organ. Great write Deborah
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Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on April 21, 2010
A very sad piece but heartfelt. Always remember Deborah what you have endured. You are indeed a very strong soul. An excellent writing too.


GOD BLESS YOU and YOUR FAMILY
Tony


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