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Curves So Complete
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Curves So Complete

 

Sometimes I may act

And feel like a man.

Doing my best to fix

And understand.

 

I’m a woman

With curves so complete.

Trust me,

No man can compete.

 

Lately, I have been

Hiding in a cave.

Feeling like a man

Lost and no longer brave.

 

I want to run

And do my best to escape.

But, what I really need

Is to always feel safe.

 

Listen to what

I’m about to say.

Gently and sweetly

Talk to me everyday.

 

Validate me

And always respect.

I’ll then be the woman

You want to protect.

 

Deborah Tornillo

Copyright© 2010

 


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 Reviews of "Curves So Complete"
Reviewed by nomtha cleopatra moss (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2010

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on July 20, 2010
Life would be much poorer without those curves !

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
Here's what I see when I read this poem: You have to take the part of a strong, competent and largely independent person, yet you are still a very feminine woman. Every woman needs to be treated with love, gentleness and respect.
May you receive all that you need, and draw your strength from the Lord. From all I can see, you are doing a terrific job with the heavy responsibilities you have.
Connie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 17, 2010
Sounds like all of us from time to time, women and men. You captured the feeling of insecurity that is part of all of us and can be best treated with kind and loving words from others. Very nicely done Deborah.
fee

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
I like this.
It is certainly what both sexes should want- soft, kind, friendly voices giving validation and respect.
Of course- doesn't hurt to throw a curve once in a while.
:)

John


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