:) I love the format you chose for this. It feels as though we are listening in on the conversation beside you, without being overwritten, lovely poem.
Beautifully composed,
This one I'll have to read to my granddaughters
thank you for sharing this wonderful poetic jewel
love & peace be with you
William
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2011
A capturing, but still and all, a liberating... the wonder of childhood is still intact in both young and aged, and enhanced with the contrastingly innocent perspectives... this is a wonderful poem, and I would like to thank you for sharing your fresh vision of childhood in all of its forms!
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
This one I'll have to read to my granddaughters
thank you for sharing this wonderful poetic jewel
love & peace be with you
William
God Bless You Richly
Roger