Like a feather (poem) by Ankin Timourian on AuthorsDen

Like a feather
by Ankin Timourian → (All Poetry by Ankin Timourian)
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Fantasies of love making with your soul mate…

Wrap your wings around me; hold me in your arms, Cover me with your light; keep me in your sight, Such a sweet delight, Hold my arms above me; tie me to your bed, Close the light and roll down the shades, Melt me with your kisses And spread your wings over my head, Bury me alive; Give me the last drop of your eternal love, Burn me from head to toe, I am destined to survive under your magical spell, Let me stay, I can surrender; I can play, Make me feel like a feather, lift me above your bed And let me float in the air, let me touch your hair, I will land with care, Let’s disappear into the night’s whimsical air, Every little nerve, every tiny cell in the flesh Is electrified and tense, Waiting to explode, Waiting to explore and play… Let’s share this unusual spark, Let’s create fireworks in your room, Let’s become tiny speckles of light And float in the air… By Ankin Timourian Copyright © 2009

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

Wonderful romance.

Reviewed by Dixie Dawn Michelle (Reader)

Outstanding libidinal depicting of a biochemical-magnetical metamorphosis of soul mates-lovers into a flying feather; "Like a feather" on wings of Cupid.

Thank you for sharing "Like a feather".

In appreciation,

Dixie Dawn Michelle

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

" tie me to your bed" --well if you insist!!lovely word imagery you have written

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Read again this poem, but the second time do it with Elaine Paige's "Memory" from Cats as the background music:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s96NZoeDs68
Then...you will experience the most exquisite combination.
The third time will hug your heart!

Georg

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

SO WELL DONE WITH THE VIVID IMAGERY THAT EXPRESSES AND SUPPORTS YOUR THEME WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by George Carroll

Warm and tender with love's sensual touch.