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Lynette N Bat-Abba

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Visiting my Sister
by Lynette N Bat-Abba → (All Poetry by Lynette N Bat-Abba)
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Orange capped Stamen touch

Legs wings curiosity

Spreading deep philosophy

Life replenished

Sorrow relinquished

“You’ve been in Daddy’s garden”

A smile

 gone with his ashes

 into sterile soil

Returns

She wipes the pollen

From the end of my nose

Asking if the Bees

Have come home too


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 Reviews of "Visiting my Sister"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 29, 2009
So uniquely expressed, Lynnie. This is the kind of writing that enters my soul and echoes there. Thank you. Love, continued success, and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
I felt this right in my heart-- so moving. I really like your style and form, too, original.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
A gentle revealing of perceptual experience.
And a beautiful collimate of innocent pondering
in the summation of your thoughts.
I like the mix of melancholy and curiousness in this.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2009
delicate, tender, sweet... and not without its pungent sting... oh, but when the frailty of family becomes a vestigial scent, the sense of loss lingers with the immediacy of an archaic aroma, drenching all in its permanent perfume.


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