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Twilight
by Robin A Spicer → (All Poetry by Robin A Spicer)
  
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A short poem about being abandonded.

Why am I lying on this bed?
Looking and feeling, like I'm dead,
People, hustling, bustling by
Don't see the tear, falling from my eye.
They tell me that, I'm not well,
Tranquilised brain, how can they tell.
In this invalid Motel,
Waiting for the dinner bell.
No more usefull, to my kin,
Only half of of what I've been,
Thrown into a garbage bin,
Dribbling through my silly grin.
Can't tell people when I'm cold,
Punishment, for growing old.
Times of laughter, times forgot.
Abandonded by those, I loved a lot.
Children see me once a year,
They don't want to see my fear.
Waiting every single day,
Hopeing that they'll pass my way,
Bring some sunshine to my life,
But they're too busy, to relieve my strife.
So now I lie here, all alone,
I think It's time to breathe a sigh,
Close my eyes, and say goodbye.

copyright (c) 1999. Robin A Spicer

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 Reviews of "Twilight"
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
There's a terrific message here, and the emotions are easily felt. (I'd like to see you work this one some more to master the flow.) Good job!

Tami

Reviewed on April 29, 2003
This was so sad, I felt this one so deeply this morning, just wish what you had to say here didn't happen so much,

Excellent message,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Linda Murray
Reviewed on April 28, 2003
Growing old is a scarry thought. We must make our lives for ourselves and not for others. Smile and write poetry or paint a picture with paint or words. Growing old can be fun if we live for ourselves and not through others. :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 28, 2003
I can relate to this it is a empty hollow feeling when all you hear between tears is your soul scraming like a banchee....
Hugs
Peggy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 28, 2003
Well written on a difficult topic.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 28, 2003
we must never abandon ourselves...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 28, 2003
In the old days, old people just wandered off to die--one less mouth to feed Now we choose a nurseless home and drug ourselcves to death.


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