O Bell (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Paul,
What I like about this poem is the overall feeling of hope. It seems to be a tribute to all the tragic events of our past and a wish that we've learned from those tragedies. I like how you've connected each verse to reach that overall sense of hope. Great piece:) Love and Hugs.
Sheila

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Wonderful, I really like this...well expressed yearning for a world that's not forlorn. :)

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Expression at its best Paul. O Bell do tell I want to stay well. GEM

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Paul ... what a beautiful, inspirational prayer. Bill

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

an inspiring delight!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

A wonderful flowing write.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Great poem. Love it. S.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Enjoyed the reading, Paul. Wouldn't it be lovely if that last line were true.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Great poem!

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Oooh, very strong write...very effective use of action, I loved that technique :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Very nice Paul!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Love this...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

This is very powerful in thought and excellent in flow.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

A true Ode done with excellence. Soothing thoughts,,Lisa

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

This was beautiful, I liked this one so much!

Reindeer

Reviewed by David Knight

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Inspirational is just the right category for this but those that need that inspiration most may not benefit from reading it.

Well Done.

David

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

really good piece, thanks Paul

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Hi Paul, Excellent rhyme, Excellent Poem!!

tony

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Very inspiring and excellent rhyme and flow in this, Paul.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Very haunting and beautiful. Great write.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Absolutely magnificent write...

Return to me O Bell of ages
Chime the years goodbye
For fear has touched our tortured souls
And mighty mountains sigh.

Smile on me O Bell of hope
Chime the century gone
For tomorrow bring a lasting joy
And a world that's not forlorn.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Excellent write, my friend.
Your talent soars :)

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Awesomely beautiful write Paul!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Good one Paul! I like the BD rhyming scheme of this poem. It also reads very smoothly.

Sandie Angel :o)