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My Perfect Rose
by Paul Berube → (All Poetry by Paul Berube)
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Gems upon this fertile soil
bring wealth into our world.
Forget the diamond pure and spoiled
or charm in every pearl.

Facets of a jewel may gleam
with brilliance I suppose
but none possess a beauty fair
and gentle as my rose.

Each petal kissed by mornings dew
share tints of rubies rare.
Sapphires charm with hints of blue
still nothing can compare.

Emeralds please a royal soul
with fortunes undisclosed
but none possess an essence sweet
and perfect as my rose.

A Midas Touch may steel the heart.
turn dreams to golden stone;
Crystal hopes will soon depart
when lusters almost gone.

Wealth of being can not abide
by all which we have chose.
After that which is no more,
I'll always have my rose.

 


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 Reviews of "My Perfect Rose"
Reviewed by Dena Moore
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Absolutely wonderful rhyme and flow...beautiful poem, as beautiful as a rose itself. Smooth and natural flow, not a hint of force in this flower :D Love, light, and blessings, Dena

Reviewed by Sue Whalen
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
My Perfect Rose
Was truly lovely, my kind of poem, simple with a wonderful message. You are a very deep soul with a wonderful kind heart.
Sue

Reviewed by Stephanie Murray (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
I love this poem. It's so descriptive and romantic!

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Such a lovely idea... Wonderful last two stanzas. Well done!

Axilea

Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Good Morning Paul,
A Lovely Rose Indeed!
Your Romantic Poetic Style Is Very Charming & Classic!!
Beautiful!

Embrasse'
Vickie

Reviewed by S Zang
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
Beautiful from beginning to end, but this particular stanza
just took my breath away:

"Facets of a jewel may gleam
with brilliance I suppose
but none possess a beauty fair
and gentle as my rose."

Such as this is why I love poetry!

Sarah

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
This is exquisite. I love every word and the feelings behind every word. Very well written.

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Amazing, simply amazing.

Tony

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
A gem of a poem ! I like the comparisions....M

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Classical beauty that is so perfect one wonders why it is not already classically published. Everything about this sings, Paul. Its cohesion is wonderful. One of the best Odes To A Rose that has ever been conceived, I'll bet! Kate xx

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
This is absolutely beautiful, Pierre

Reviewed by Kathy Kopp
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Do you go to Gem shows? or are you a dealer in sapphires and other precious stones? That's not only why I like your poem: I admire your flow of rhymes, the refrain of your rose, the relationship of gemstones and flowers, both found in the earth, and the picture -- so cool! Keep writing, Paul.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Very lovely~`*

Reviewed by Because . (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2008
a beautifully wrought poem..your rhyme is wonderful.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
WOnderful....one of your very best my friend....love n luck...BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Leann Marshall
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Siiighhh...very romantic in its highest sense. Lovely!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
So beautiful to read on a cold winter afternoon!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
ohhhhhhhh Paul!!!!!
this should go on a plaque.....I just love it, what a lovely poem to read on a January morning, with a cup of rose hip tea lol...
this is a keeper, for more reasons than can be expressed.......
applause for this sweet dedication :)
pax Anita

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Thank you for the beauty in your words Paul, my husband always says there is nothing as beautiful as his Rose of course I think he is saying it about me but maybe not now that I have read your words. Thank you for sharing such wonderful words Paul.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
Very touching piece. Expertly crafted text. I enjoyed the rhythm and flow of your words and the lovely vision you created of your precious rose.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Love the comparisons in this piece - that none can compare to your rose. Beautifully written and a sure pleasure to read! Take care of you. - Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Photo and verses complement one another very effectively. Thanks, Paul. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
What a lucky rose!! This deeply romantic and rhythmically penned
ode is very refreshing in a day when Cynicism seems so close to taking
over. As for flowers, surely the rose is queen. The perfect metaphor!! Bless you for caring so deeply. Sharing this wonderful rose!!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
lovely!

Reviewed on October 24, 2007
Very beautiful poem and photo.

Reviewed by Monica Martin
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
Such wondrous words you weave. This is utterly beautiful, Paul.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
"I'll always have my rose..."

How wonderfully put, Paul...I can smell the fragrance of your , "My Perfect Rose" from here...
I love roses and mine are in full bloom too!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Virginia Tolles
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Oh, how delightful! You have a wonderfully gentle, carressing way with a word, Paul. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. P.S. Thank you for your kind words on my post, "Acceptance."

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Written with the souls heart in mind and written exquisitely . . .

Reviewed on October 1, 2007
This, Dear Heart, is perfection! Beautiful thoughts and flawless flow and rhyme. Gorgeous pen Paul.

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Stunning write I love roses
And this poem is so vivid
That I'm enjoying the delicate aroma of
This rose of a poem!!
Absolutely beautiful!!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Beautiful writing Paul...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
lovely write

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
A Rose by any other name would not be as sweet, a very fine poem here
Thank you for such a beauty.
Peace, Love, and Light,

Amber "V"

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Yes I can only echo the previous reviewers comments in saying this is one of the best nature and in particular "Rose" tribute to grace the pages of the den in a long time. Well done Paul.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
There are no riches in this world like the the riches of a Rose. The color and frangrance with one sniff with steal your heart and mind. Beautiful write...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
The poem a wonderful tribute to the picture.
The picture a wonderful tribute to the poem.

Roses are my favorite flower, especially those whose scent reaches me before I can get really close to them.

Kathy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Most beautiful Paul!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Paul, I've read many poems about roses, but this is one of the best. I love it. Every line and stanza is beautifully written. And what a beautiful rose that is!

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Paul, this is absolutely beautiful!! I love the rhyme & rhythm and the choice of words magnify the beauty of this poem. I believe this is one of your finest writings. This is truly a keeper!

Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Paul,

This. Is. Beautiful. Image; verse; perfect bloom. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
What a beautiful and gentle write my friend, a poem as tender as the heart from which it came! Enjoyed this elegant offering!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
I have been waiting to read a poem from you,,This was worth the wait,
A Delicate Beautiful Poem ! Christine

Reviewed on September 29, 2007
WOW! What an amazing Poem, I feel the beautiful frangrance, in these
rose YOU speak about!
AWESOMELY Written Paul!
I love this poem and your heart!
Roses of all shades are blessings in our days~! I love my rose bushes that I tend with a loving hand, that you sure do understand! :)
Much love and Warmer hugs, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive! Happy and STrong! This Harvest Season that has sprung!

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Holly and Chantilly are right! Love the write and the pic. In my garden, I have Mississippi Rainbow Roses, a nod to my home state.
Great write!
Love,
Annie

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Wonderful writing sweet man,love the picture...Hugsssss

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Exquisite poem Paul..the rose is my favorite flower...doesn't matter what color... they are all so gorgoeus. Excellent writing, love holly


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