Have you been hangin' out in my head?!? I haven't written much at all in weeks, and I'm dying to get back to it. I've missed reading your work! I'd say, with this write, you're well on your way back. Love the style in this one.
Tami
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2003
Have an o p e n m i n d and the words will flow into your soul.
Great Job! Susan Sparks
I think we have all been there at some point, it must be an annual vacation time for the Muse at the moment! Though you don't seem to be doing that badly during its absence! Jackie <> <
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2003
I cannot imagine you without words. Great write!
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2003
A call to the muse we all can relate to. Beautifully penned, mi'lord.
~Jackie~
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
Your muse is there......Just whistle ;)
A stunning poem...You know I love antique language. Loved every word.. Ty, Dani
Clap, clap, clap!! I love this, Paul! Have you checked your shadow's shadow for your muse? I think she is right behind you!! :)
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Paul... I like this...beent there...Know what is like...but the muse does return...I love how you used the last word of the last line for the first in the next verse...nice work..floria
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Tis folly, these words you speak of.....you jest with us surely, yes you jest!.....
Agreat piece of writing, as usual.
Been asking myself this lately!!!! I feel like it has abandoned me... great write, Paul! Hope your muse accepts your pleading... mine hasn't..... yet.... smiles to you....
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Extremely well written! Nice job.
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
..stunning poetry as usual..oh..you don't need a muse..you always have YOU..everything is within for the taking..just dive in and get it..simple?..you betcha!!!..:)
Oh do I know how you feel! LOL. I wrote about it too last July (2002)..called "Writer's Cramp". Yours is so well written and heartfelt, mine was equally heartfelt but written tongue in cheek. ;)Silver
Here is the link, if you would like to check it out. ;)
http://authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=21958
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Excellent work Paul! Great rhyme, rhythm and flow.
sending out the call for a muse of my own, guess all us poets need one from time to time.. very good write
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Paul,
Your verses are romantically stunning! I couldn't take my eyes off of it! I swear... it was like Pavlov and the dogs...lol--I couldn't help BUT TO READ it all. This is breath taking poetry. After she reads this.... aaaaaahh, she'll HAVE TO come back.
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We all know this feeling! I like the word choices and format - they bring the humor in this poem to life. Love it:) Hugs~
Sheila
Have you been hangin' out in my head?!? I haven't written much at all in weeks, and I'm dying to get back to it. I've missed reading your work! I'd say, with this write, you're well on your way back. Love the style in this one.
Tami
Great Job! Susan Sparks
~Jackie~
A stunning poem...You know I love antique language. Loved every word.. Ty, Dani
Reindeer
Agreat piece of writing, as usual.
In Spirit,
Bear
Vesna
Here is the link, if you would like to check it out. ;)
http://authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=21958
~Joseph
love Tinka
I agree with the others..
After reading this
she will hear your
plea...
Beautiful!!
Trixie :)
Your verses are romantically stunning! I couldn't take my eyes off of it! I swear... it was like Pavlov and the dogs...lol--I couldn't help BUT TO READ it all. This is breath taking poetry. After she reads this.... aaaaaahh, she'll HAVE TO come back.
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
no, your muse didn't abandon you--not with this stunning write
encore! :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
~Sara~
~Chrissie