I'm blushing...can you feel the heat? I'm overwhelmed by your poem and to think my poem allowed this road to open in your Muse is humbling. Thank you and if you'd like more prodding then allow me to give it another try because whatever I did to allow this to come out in your sribe was more than I expected.
~curtsy~
Wonderful and moving love. It is the emotion that inspires not me.
I love the way you did this. Change the "your" to "you're" in the fourth verse. Those darn typos. Please do the same for me when you notice mine. Thank you for sharing this poetic gem. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Paul this is beautifully done..your meter is great ....floria
Beautiful poem and dedication to Susan
"Endearments have a time and place,
when touching someone's heart,
but like a role, performed with soul,
rehearsed without the part.
Feelings must be greater than
mere whispers on your mind.
A patient smile or sweet caress,
should not be pressed to find."
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
pax A
Antoinette
Thankyou for this precious gem..it's in my library!
v.
Fine work....ty, Dani
Reindeer
Beautiful romantic write.
Love it!!!!
Trixie :)
Rodd
I'm blushing...can you feel the heat? I'm overwhelmed by your poem and to think my poem allowed this road to open in your Muse is humbling. Thank you and if you'd like more prodding then allow me to give it another try because whatever I did to allow this to come out in your sribe was more than I expected.
~curtsy~
Wonderful and moving love. It is the emotion that inspires not me.
Always harmony,
Susan
Love Tinka
"Endearments have a time and place,
when touching someone's heart,
but like a role, performed with soul,
rehearsed without the part.
Feelings must be greater than
mere whispers on your mind.
A patient smile or sweet caress,
should not be pressed to find."
Peggy
~Chrissie