The last word in the first line of the first stanza becomes the first word in the fourth line of the second stanza
Neglected, on the edge of finality. Protected, tomorrow lies in uncertainty. Rejected, nature bares to humanity. Expected, to savor an ort of insanity.
Insanity, forces the hand of aggression. Humanity, severs cords in succession. Uncertainty, savors representation. Finality, masters humiliation.
Humiliation, seeks quiet refinement. Representation, loses confinement. Succession, expresses words of resentment. Aggression, undoubtedly, acts of contentment.
Contentment, foreseen, never expected. Resentment, exposed, always rejected. Confinement, a method of being protected. Refinement, can be, forever neglected.
A brilliant play on words with many messages along the way. This one takes a slow read-through so nothing is missed. Fantastic work! -Sheila
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2004
Blimey not only clever but leaves one pondering..
Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
very clever!
perplexing it is...
jessica
aka
gypsie
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
We must always battle to win this war of words...It is in ourselves that we win when we see..It is not easy being human with humility...michael
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 28, 2003
Noe THAT'S what I call TALENT!!
Very clever...
Great write!
vesna :)
Happy New Year!!!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2003
How did I miss this Paul?? This is so clever and unique, you're so smart. Merry Christmas, milk and cookies are ready, have you got your Santa suit on? Have a beautiful christmas Paul and a wonderful New Year.
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Five years have passed. The sequel to the award-winning Chapel of Eternal Love, this book revisits the same couples in the first book, and where the lives have taken them since they left the altar at The Chapel of Eternal Love
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A brilliant play on words with many messages along the way. This one takes a slow read-through so nothing is missed. Fantastic work! -Sheila
perplexing it is...
jessica
aka
gypsie
Very clever...
Great write!
vesna :)
Happy New Year!!!
Superb Paul!
Happy Holidays
Sheila
In other words...a great piece.
I must agree with everyone
This is a great write...
Happy Holidays...
Trixie :)
Excellent
~Chrissie
Best regards,
Leland
meantime...lol!!
Verrry well done Paul!!
It took me quite a while to figure out what the secret is!!
But I think I got it......do I?
"Confinement, a method of being protected."
Good write, Paul!
PAX
a
lol
"Go Figure!!!" is a thought's developer; a pleasing message bringing wise alertness. It flows on to wisdom.
Instructing and inspiring reading "Go Figure!!!" is.
May, Poet Paul Berube, enjoy a Memorable Season.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Happy Holidays to you!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)