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NE ME QUITTE PAS by Jacques Brel, a new translation by Joel Sattler
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Actually, to call this a "translation" is a misnomer.

More than half of it is a true translation,
but the rest is a reinterpretation of the meaning,
and some of it is not Brel at all, but me.


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NE ME QUITTE PAS by Jacques Brel, a new translation by Joel Sattler

 

New title: “Don’t Give Up On Me”

 

 

 

Don’t give up on me

Why can’t you forget too? 

Learn to forget

What is gone and yet

To forget the time

The crimes of passion

And the time we lost

In foolish fashion

Forget all the hours

Of accusing “why”

That killed happiness

And the heart inside

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

 

I will catch for you

The pearls of the rain

From the countries where

It will never rain

I’ll dig in the earth

Till I have to die

To dress you royally  

in the gold and light

I’ll set you in a realm

where love is the king

where love is the law

And where you are queen

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me 

 

Don’t give up on me

I’ll invent for you

Words that seem insane

But you know are true

I’ll tell you a tale 

Of lovers who looked twice

Saw their hearts’ desire

Burn up in the fire

And I will tell for you

The story of a king

Who died an empty thing

From never meeting you

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

 

One can often see

Driven to the brink

The volcano burst

That was thought extinct

Seems we have to learn

When the earth is burned

better wheat will grow 

Than from April sown 

And when day has died

would sky be so alive 

If the black and the red

Could not there be wed?

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me 

 

Don’t give up on me

I will shed no tears

I won’t even speak

I’ll just hide in here

To catch a glimpse of you

Dancing with a smile

Listening to you 

Laughing all the while

If you will let me be

Your shadow silhouette

The shadow of your hand

The shadow of a man

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

Don’t give up on me

 

 

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Original version in French:



Ne me quitte pas
Il faut oublier
Tout peut s'oublier
Qui s'enfuit deja
Oublier le temps
Des malentendus
Et le temps perdu
A savoir comment
Oublier ces heures
Qui tuaient parfois
A coups de pourquoi
Le coeur du bonheure
Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas



Moi je t'offrirai
Des perles du pluie
Venues de pays
Ou il ne pleut pas
Je creuserai la terre
Jusqu'apres ma mort
Pour couvrir ton corps
D'or et de lumiere
Je ferai un domaine
Ou l'amour sera roi
Ou l'amour sera loi
Ou tu seras reine
Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas



Ne me quitte pas
Je t'inventerai
Des mots insensés
Que tu comprendras
Je te parlerai
De ces amants là
Qui ont vu deux fois
Leurs coeurs s'embraser
Je te racont'rai
L'histoire de ce roi
Mort de n'avoir pas
Pu te rencontrer
Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas



On a vu souvent
Rejaillir le feu
De l'ancien volcan
Qu'on croyait trop vieux
Il est paraît-il
Des terres brûlées
Donnant plus de blé
Qu'un meilleur avril
Et quand vient le soir
Pour qu'un ciel flamboie
Le rouge et le noir
Ne s'épousent-ils pas
Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas



Ne me quitte pas
Je ne veux plus pleurer
Je ne veux plus parler
Je me cacherai là
A te regarder
Danser et sourire
Et à t'écouter
Chanter et puis rire
Laisse-moi devenir
L'ombre de ton ombre
L'ombre de ta main
L'ombre de ton chien
Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

Ne me quitte pas

 

 

 

My version is based on a recording by Jacques Brel:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=za_6A0XnMyw 

 

 

===================================   

 

As usual, let me say, 

that this is not an EXACT translation,

but an interpretation of the original lyrics

that is meant to be singable in English.

 

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 Reviews of "NE ME QUITTE PAS by Jacques Brel, a new translation by Joel Sattler"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
Lovely indeed..Hugss

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
A beautifully written sacrifice if self for another.


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