Shades of The Edmonton FitzGerald! I started reading Moby Dick one time and gave up in the middle of the psychological mumbo-jumbo in the first or second chapter, I can't remember, but it doesn't matter. What matters is that I know the story, and you have captured it quite well. All it needs is a catchy tune and it could become one of the folk favorites out there that thrill us whenever we hear them.
Ron