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The Bench -- A Symphony in B Flat Major
Andante con gusto
Sapphire swirls through pink and lavender, as little clouds trimmed in yellow, traveled slowly across the sky and scattered blue comes into view. Weeping willows swayed to the breeze. The legatto sound of a water-fall, the soft trill of the lake a catfish jumped on a dotted eight, a mallard silently glides by, dew drops glisten on new grass.
Multo lento
The bench is still there, by the tranquil waters. Still there, since that early spring morning, one very much like this one, when she lifted her gaze, and she first saw his face.
Allegro non troppo
C'est le printemps! Le jardin est enchanté! She abandoned her book on the bench, it’s been her excuse, any way. This is the place where they meet, away from curious eyes, away from noise and idle talk. Here, the scent of gardenias soothes the air, sunlight filters through the weeping willows, and their hearts birth a rhyme. They walk briskly, from opposite sides of the lake, her hair is swept by the breeze, they rush the last few steps, they meet, they touch, they kiss.
Stacatto
Summer; come and gone. The bench; she sits and waits. The book -- she’s read; twice. Fog covers the lake. The catfish rest. Green turned yellow underfoot. They said in town, he had another’s hand.
Moderatto e con multo sentimento
The bench, weather-beaten, still there by the lake where she sits, now holding a different book in her hand. She abandoned the old one, She knew the unfinished rhymes by heart.
It is spring, just like that one of many years ago. But the waterfall sings a different song, and the colors, still sapphire and lavender pink have matured to deeper, richer hues; the sun no longer yellow – it’s gold.
She abandoned her book on the bench, it’s been an excuse, any way. Two figures come walking from the other side of the lake. A different face – she smiles. She doesn’t run to them – no need to; she walks. They rush the last few steps, they meet, they touch, they kiss.
One she calls husband, the other, son.
Carmen Ruggero .2004
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This is why you should write more poetry - superb!!
Blessings,
Robert
Tami
Very nice. Great imagery throughout. Suggestion: Drop the "one" in the last line so that it ends as...
"One she calls husband
the other son."
This work may win you the contest.
Dan S.
~Chrissie
Gina
On this thirty-sixth day of Spring, I Salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I'm saving this one..
Vesna :)
She abandoned her book on the bench,
it’s been an excuse, any way.
Two figures come walking
from the other side of the lake.
A different face – she smiles.
She doesn’t run to them –
no need to; she walks.
They rush the last few steps,
they meet,
they touch,
they kiss.
One she calls husband,
the other one, son. ""
BRAVA>>>>>>
Reindeer
Love Tinka
A creative feast for hungry poets,to learn from!
Magnifico!
It's good to see you again. Lisa