A Moment in Time (poem) by Carmen Ruggero on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

poignant read

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

the indeterminacy of some endings haunt us through life...what if?

a sobering write.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

This is very moving. I love the sadness and the sense of lonely well being at the end. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 14, 2004

Deeply moving and meaningful, Carmen. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 14, 2004

"A Moment in Time" reflects moments in the momentary life, and makes the readers feel the beats of a heart that knows the road to wisdom.

Enjoyable reading from a heartily writing.

Drink the dews of happiness in the conclusion of your work.

Never rest Your pen; don't let Your quills dry.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

BRILLIANT work, Carmen!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Carmen, such consolation in resignation? You say so much in these few lines. Excellent work.

Gina

Reviewed by Robert Montesino

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Oh yes, this poem connects, I too have felt the sentiments expressed!

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Very sad, very touching, and beautifully written, Carmen.
Blessings,
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Ouch, so sad, so true, if only afore we knew, yup it's been my worse friend too, well written

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Deeply moving, and profoundly sad. Wonderfully done!
Wonderful flow; wonderful rhyme; nice overall pace and feel.
-- Jeff

Reviewed by Dan Summerfield (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

Many have defined the fear of loneliness. Here you have defined the loneliness of fear. Very nice.

Dan S.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

Wow this is a sad one. The last stanza says a lot. Silence is a sure bet to kill a relationship. I hope all is well.

peace

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

very well written!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

So bittersweet Carmen, beautifully written...I sense that as you say, it is for the best, yet that doesn't make the hurt less(;-...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

Sad and beautifully written.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

Carmen....enjoyed this piece....glad things did work out for the best for you..touching write..floria

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

Most powerfully penned, Carmen. Well done.

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

As you say, Carmen, it was for the best. Life teaches that everything and every event proceeds and ends just as it was meant to end; therefore, we must not believe what we can see nor what we can hear, for it all is an illusion meant to keep us from reality. Wonderfully good write. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

This one tugs hard at the emotions! Outstanding poetry, my friend...~Z~

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

I love this, Carmen. It reverberates with a
truth many of us poets have experienced, then
been inspired by, in retrospect.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

Hi Carmen,
Such a heartfelt write...
Written so beautil....

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Helga Ross

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

Carmen, very touching write and one that reminds me of a situation quite similar.
I note and like how you're trying your hand at various styles, and rhyme, by the way.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

Very kinda depressing write Carmen!!

Love Tinka