This was very good, and the ending...
"On this table, if I dare, I
Work my pain; deftly cutting
Through the layers of memory
To find the treasure within."
This is a beautiful write,
my friend. We all have hidden
pain deep within us that we
have to cut through, that can
sometimes hurt more than the pain
itself. Excellent Write!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
Much harder to work with the inner pain of the mind. Sometimes it is so many layers thick; that we seem to struggle forever one layer at a time. Does it get better? Sometimes yes and sometimes no. But the struggle goes on anyway. Bill
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"On this table, if I dare, I
Work my pain; deftly cutting
Through the layers of memory
To find the treasure within."
So very true!!!
Maria
my friend. We all have hidden
pain deep within us that we
have to cut through, that can
sometimes hurt more than the pain
itself. Excellent Write!!!!!!!!!