The Tshongololo Jive (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

The Tshongololo Jive
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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The Tshongololo Jive Weird Tshongolo o bug with your many feet Legs not ever loosing its beat Follow each other in high speed Like a choo-choo train indeed Moving indoors to tell us it�s going to rain Why do you roll up like a wheel when I touch you man Tshongolo!! Why do you hide your head Or is that the reason why they call you centipede If I pick you up you shit on my hand Are you afraid of me my mate You unroll your wheel after resting for awhile And rush forward to where ever you go Till something gets in your way And then you roll up and play dead again Why not running instead Weird Tshongololo with your many feet Does any of your legs ever gets in the way To make you trip and fall I call you a little god of the rain But to children you could be such a pain Ashley calls you a piece of shit Ed would call you a French fry's friend Tshongololo brown or black Or Green to fit this bit... Doing The Tshongololo Jive hahaha.. Copyright � 2005 Tinka ps: {prenounced "Tshong-gaw-law-law" }

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

(Clapping!) Now I see why you wanted me to read this!! It's adorable ... and I'm STILL laughing! Your cartoon up above is perfect for this, too.
Tinka, I love your humor!!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on June 5, 2005

World Beat. Township Jive. Regionalism translated into universalism. Well done.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Twinka, you little inka,
me thinking,
you always inking,
like a star twinking.
I see you shining,
over there word mining.
If words were gold,
you'd already have a rich hold.

G

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Oh, I'm alive and well. Cute little dance with words here, Tink.

Reviewed by jude forese

lol ... luv it!

Reviewed by E. Richardson

heheheh...Tinka, this is funny as all get out...so is the graphic. Methinks there is something very sharp under that humor though.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

oh my oh my, wow

Reviewed by E T Waldron

hahahahaha Tinka you cracked me up with this one,between the graphics and your tongue in cheek poem! great stuff Tinks!;-)LOL

Eileen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

LOL. So that's how a centi-pead..

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Off The Wall Tshoooonnnnngggggg-gaw-law-law...

TRASK

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

This is absolutely a hoot...love it Tinks!

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Felix Perry

This is a really cool write..love it. So full of wonder and apprecaition on Mother Nature's quirky bug.

Felix

Reviewed by L. Figgins

LOL! Well, the force of a great imagination can be a fulfilling thing! LOL! As this write illustrates. You too funny, my crazy sis!!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

TINKA!!!!!!!!!!

Laffin too hard to review--you, my der4a, are a mess!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Kalra. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Ed would call you a French fry's friend

HO HO!! Even French Frys need a friend once in awhile, too, ya know, Tinka!

And yes, I even like these little critters; they fascinate me with all their legs - and my wife is absolutely terrified of them.

PS You should find your little Tshongololo friend a female Tshongololo friend!! And that is one great graphic.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Laffin' too hard to review! OW, my sides! LOL

Reviewed by George Carroll

The poor centipede doesn't like to get wet. Well done Tinka. I never saw that word before Tshongplolo I guess what ever LoLo wants Lolo gets even if it is a French fry.LOL

Or is that the reason why they call you centipede