This was such a lovely poem William, beautiful and very lovely,
Reindeer
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2004
William, staring into infinity far away; what will the knight defend.
His lady fair? A noble cause in whatever he choses I think! Excellent poem. Bill Murray
This poem ended beautifully. I'm sympathizing on the "Knight" in your writes. I hope he'll find strength in himself to love himself. I hope others will see him in a different light and give him the love he needs.
Synopsis
Zeke Milligan is stuck between a rock and a hard place. He is desperately in love with Lynn, but a dark secret from his past continues to rear its ugly head. Worse yet, he persistently punishes the love of his life for events that took p
Reindeer
His lady fair? A noble cause in whatever he choses I think! Excellent poem. Bill Murray
"Winds howling
Through shattered windows
Of tint, once colorfully
Expressing, Out reached arms
Of an arch angel."
also:
"The lord placed
Upon his face, a smile divine
Eyes opened, glazed
Staring far away
Into the infinity's edge
Of his true love."
Bravo, William!
William
Stunning piece!!
Love Tinka
powerfully written!
This poem ended beautifully. I'm sympathizing on the "Knight" in your writes. I hope he'll find strength in himself to love himself. I hope others will see him in a different light and give him the love he needs.
A very well-done and heartfelt piece.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Excellent doesn't do this justice..
*Linda*