Insane Without You (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 16, 2008

A love like yours will survive. Each need their own space once in a while. Who would not like a trip to NY, you are very generous to you love. This is what you think of your love expressed in poetry and it is lovely.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 11, 2004

William what a lovely write, my friend, she is a lucky woman
Carole

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

Expressed with deep feelings, you've showed it here. Well done on this great turn out, at the end, of a lonely situation.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

Lovingly expressed, William. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Beautiful poem!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

A wonderful look at a powerful and real love.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

This is beautiful. And so upbeat in the end--thank goodness. I was reading it with fear in my heart. I can totally identify. My husband and I can't stand to be apart.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

this brings to mind the other.......most horrific side of the coin.......those parted by death....your write is about a temporary
absense..........
the other is final........

this one made me think........it was well done emotionally touching......pax A

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

You've expressed the utter emptiness and loneliness of a soul mate's absence quite well in this poetic piece, William. So glad there was a happy ending.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

This just opened the plugs from my eyes and made me cry bigtime!!
This love "thingy" can be quite painful at times Huh????
Geeeez now I am all snotty and trying to write this not so easy...first a sad letter I wrote then I read this and "wham"...teardrops "plashes" to the floor....lol...no joking!!

Beautifully written dear friend!!

Ad B M is right this could bring up a good song!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Poet, often times too many do not take the time necessary to savor the one who makes them feel this way whenever their significant other is away from the nest, could lead one to become restless until they return back home. A beautiful declaration to the one who does make one feel this great inside, is a shining testament to this person�s ability to bring solace into one�s life. Incredible timeless poetry. Thank you for sharing it. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

like it's said "distance makes the heart grow fonder"

nicely penned!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

A fine romantic read William

Reviewed by Alice Cooper (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

A very emotional, heartfelt tribute to another who could only create these special emotions inside of you. I know the feel of them, but I have never received the gift from someone who can love me so deep as your Lady did you Willilam. I just thought of something? I think a great song title for a poem like this would be "Straight From My Heart?" What do you think of that William?
You are fortunate indeed to have travelled this journey arriving at journeys emd with these special fellings. I travelled the same route
also but with a different result. B.M.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

enjoyed much. excellent poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Beautifully described mood of missing you love,and
the happiness upon her return!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

What are talking about, Bill, insanity is being married, so you can't be driven there, or it would be a short drive...This was quite nice and quite well thought out...Peace, Ed & Rufuz