Silent Lips (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 25, 2005

In French, there is a saying that goes like this: Revenge is a dish that is eaten cold. I thought it appropriate here, William. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

william,

the forbidden fruit?

excellence!
thanks,
d.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Wow.....Most excellent but sad write William!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

wow, William....now that would be one powerful kiss....another excellent write my friend...

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Oh so powerful and excellent, very dark,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

Silent but Deadly - and a most powerful piece, William.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 11, 2005

William....gem of a write...loved the way you started this write and the ending was superb too....clap clap clap...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

wow...this is excellent! The flow and repetition of that one one has the effect of a triphammer.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Don't wet your own lips with your tongue or the cyanide with be the last thing you taste...ed

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Sad, very sad, and there are so many women to love and hate out here?
Enjoy your writings William...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

now this is the kiss of death!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Talk about a knockout kiss...

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Wow William..this packs a powerful punch!
EXCELLENT !!

~Linda

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Talk about sweet revenge. You have capture what many have thought right after being dumped.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

This is a very compelling write and Larry is right.

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Sort of takes grieving to a whole 'nother level, doesn't it?

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 10, 2005

Oh my William! That is some incredible poem!
You have me licking my lips and cringing;-)
Well done!...

etw