A Bowl Of Soup (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

I enjoyed this very much, it was sweet and wonderful for it keeps the reader wanting more

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

This is such a wonderful poem. It really brings so much to life and the treasures of each day. Amazing how something we do everyday one day bothers us and wakes us up to the treasures of today.
Fantastic and loving awakening poem.
Tracey

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

It's so real it hurts, William. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

when push comes to shove, we really are all alone in this existence... wonderful capture, William! now go heat up that bowl of soup and enjoy!
very best,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Like no other, you really do hit the parts we can not...

Well done

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

William,

So poignant...so delicate...so private a moment...softly captured through your words. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

A perfect tender moment William, written with love...

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

This was so lovely William, very beautiful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Okay this brought tears to my eyes...this is so tender...but bleeds at the same time!!

Hope you know what I mean!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

A truly powerful 'slice of life,' piece, William.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Ooh William, this is such a beautiful write! Excellent passionate write! I love how you wrote on appreciation and acknowledgement for your loved one, using a simple deed.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

So poignant William, wanting the closeness of another body, food can always wait. Excellent poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

I am sure as well another tear did find its way out of her eyes too...another pretty one, Bill...Ed

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

All from a bowl of soup. sometimes the simplest or oddest things can trigger tears. A moment of fear but thankful that there's someone that you love and trust is there.
Very soft and emotional write.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 16, 2005

Such bittersweetness flows from your verses, William.
Take care,
Sherry