Two Timing Man (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 9, 2003

Peeeeeeww!!........this hurts like a punch to the gut!!!!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2003

Ouch.....William...kind of dont know what to say about the situation...but I do know what to say about the poem...GREAT WRITE...always enjoy your "real to life" poems...floria

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2003

Good Morning, William
This is a very powerful write. Excellent!!

yf
tony

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2003

So sad and well written.

Reviewed by jerry cruz (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2003

It's hard to write or even talk about the mistakes we make in life, but when we face up to our actions, it helps build self esteem and assuages guilt. I can identify. Danke' Schoen miene Bruther!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 9, 2003

Excellent William.

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

i love this poem!!! sorry, but i do. :)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

Man's salvation is not from the words he hears form others, but from the truth he knows about himself! good job, great write!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

There's nothing worse , ya understand
Than the guiltiness of a two timing man"...
I recall this little ditty from my grandmothers lips. I hate to say what else she said but let's just say a man is only as good as his word and she made reference to a Mason Jar.

Thanks for your poem. I reflected upon a great well of wisdom handed down years ago.
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

Brilliant write,though sad...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

William,
Oh this one hurt.
Excellent.
Peg

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

This is powerful , my
friend. Very intense.
Hope all is Ok with you..

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

Nicely done William, enjoy reading your work.

Nancy