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While You Sleep
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
   Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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While you were sleeping I thought of you 
Your wonderful wit...your anger too 
That awesome appeal with hands that are great
The way that you touch me... for goodness sake
Its a fancy I need with the love I can use
The heart of this man and the soul of a muse
Nature all wound up and packaged so neat
Pieces of heaven and tasting so sweet
No diet control... I could never win
I'd dine on your passions again and again
It's awesome and filling, it's fate and it's love
It pushes toward heaven and backwards the shove
It's lightning and thunder with filtered rain
It's cleansing a heart once full of pain
It's healing treasures and warming like toast
Gregarious virtues and rhythms that boast
It's wet... sometimes wild... and hard things that burst
It's love and it's you... then its quenching a thirst
I thought of you and goosebumps broke out
Along with mixed climaxes

Deep breaths and shouts 

My mind is alive while yours is asleep
Warming to pleasures in your soul... I keep.

 

Copyright 2004

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Susan K. Rowse


 


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 Reviews of "While You Sleep"
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
I can only add to what everyone else says here,this is a flawless superb piece that just flows at an amazing pace, 10 out of 10, most definately...take care...Mark x

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
Susan you hit a home run with this beauty!
Your rhythm and rhyme are flawless!Kudo's

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
Great fireside read. the poem really is FANERIFIK.....One gets that warm feeling from this...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
This is one of the best poems I have ever read on this site. I say that in all honesty.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
Soulmates are marvelous - as is this poem!


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