While you were sleeping I thought of you Your wonderful wit...your anger too That awesome appeal with hands that are great The way that you touch me... for goodness sake Its a fancy I need with the love I can use The heart of this man and the soul of a muse Nature all wound up and packaged so neat Pieces of heaven and tasting so sweet No diet control... I could never win I'd dine on your passions again and again It's awesome and filling, it's fate and it's love It pushes toward heaven and backwards the shove It's lightning and thunder with filtered rain It's cleansing a heart once full of pain It's healing treasures and warming like toast Gregarious virtues and rhythms that boast It's wet... sometimes wild... and hard things that burst It's love and it's you... then its quenching a thirst I thought of you and goosebumps broke out Along with mixed climaxes
Deep breaths and shouts
My mind is alive while yours is asleep Warming to pleasures in your soul... I keep.
Copyright 2004
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Susan K. Rowse
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Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
I can only add to what everyone else says here,this is a flawless superb piece that just flows at an amazing pace, 10 out of 10, most definately...take care...Mark x
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