In the nuance of a dejavu
Just where beginning starts
When familiar sorts through mystery
For forlorned and lonely hearts
A voice chokes up with every tinge
Then teardrops start to form
As familiar love wakens new
Then magnifies the norm
This mystery...the dejavu
As old in new emerges
Just as the new forsakes it all
With deadend loveless searches.
What a hell of a poem! My kind of realism and even a hit of malice runs throughout this piece. Such a wonderful line: "As old in new emerges." THAT my fine poets is, as we used to say in the sixties, some heavy shit. Good writing all the way around here.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Ron
Merry Christmas dear friend!!
Love Tinka
enjoyed much
William Peace & Love
Season's Greetings
Here's wishing you a Wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
this is amazing!
thought provoking, deep poetry you've penned here--excellent!
(((HUGS))), love and merry Christmas, karla. :)
Jack