This seems to me to be a Shakespearian soliloquy for a woman of modern times. You touch the depths and breadth of pain and lonely bleakness here, Susan, and yet with the self-knowledge perhaps that this is but a tunnel that is to be passed through. Such honesty combined with a "wise head on sensible shoulders"... I am sure this will speak to, comfort and encourage many who have been or are going through something similar right now. It is sooo good to read you again. Some penetrating thoughts and images to ponder here. TY Kate xx
This is superb, and I love the flow and ebb of it's verses. A lot to be learned from it also. We all feel let down by life at times but the trick is to rise as soon as we can take stock and move on. A new love, a child's love or a friend found can all help when we need that extra push. Nice write Susan.
Ron
awesome poetry ...
Honest, bare bones emotion in your powerful, beautiful imagery. Thank you, Poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Love Tinka
Felix