Foolish Damsel (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 13, 2006

What a true and beautiful heart you have to write so pure and honestly. Your words make me ponder many things. Great message here. Pierre.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 12, 2006

Now that's some wordplay!

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 12, 2006

Very moving write...thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Susan, a powerful and moving journey, from your daydreaming, to the time where you are ready to take your head out of the clouds, and begin anew. Excellent heartsong!

Just keep looking Up; from whence, comes our help.

Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Exquisite poetry, Susan, that reaches deep and touches the soul. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

And LOVE that pic.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Susan

Another glorious example of your formidable arsenal of emotionally charged writes, that reach and plummet the full spectrum of emotions and sentiments..

Hang Tough

Blessings

Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Timelines teach a lesson well - they truly do, Susan, for all of us.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

As mystifying and brilliant as the poetic skies it ascends to, Susan. Truly inspired in craft and concepts. Flowing and yet so tightly woven in terms of dense imagery and metaphor. One of your very best, I reckon... and there are many! :)) Passion and emotion surely presses through every point of your pen, like moisture dripping through a cheesecloth. You feed us ALWAYS with the finest of poetic fare. In order to know what it is to have the cherry on the top, you have first to scrape the barrel, perhaps. You are one of the greatest expressors of the whole gamut and range of feelings that I have ever come across... sensuous is just not the word. Totally excellent. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

I love how you bring us from one extreme to another in your superb poems, Sis! Always making us think while entertaining us with your superior mind!Reaching upwards is the only way!...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Within the darkness of this write is the ray of hope that transcends the gloom. Marvelous

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Thats it
transcend the hurt........reach for that height......and look down and see the pain as diminished. This is so well written, as always........you express everything so well.......but you know what......since you are so talented...........:)
why not try to write a silly one......get your mind off......the weighty stuff........

I bet you can........
not on demand........but sometime???

pax A

Reviewed by ronald genise

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

A smile can change so many things

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

When you decide to give us mere mortals a taste of what you really have inside of you, you do it, in, of course grand style. This is one hell of a poem, a little longer and it might qualify as an ode. I like odes, and longer poetry, I damn sure like this.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Holy Schmoly Southern Belle! Are you OK?

The emotion in this gripped me in razored talons. Is this an emotion provoked from what's happening in the world?

This is so powerful and insightful! It sounds like someone who has reached the end of a season and is contemplating beginning anew. The image has at least three different kinds of cloud formations and subtly speaks of options that could enrich or confuse a decision making process in ones life.

So bloody poetic ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg