You gave the world a poem
Stars with brilliance
A moon with a man
You gave lover's the song
The heartbeat between every word
You gave an infant a smile
Cotton candy breaths
Small fingers entwined with a wrinkled hand
You gave color... technicolor
Dancers floated above the room
Creatures wooed and feathers froze in flight
Songs drifted over the mounatins
Voices rose to be heard around the world
You made Peace more than just a word
A Poet enhances living
Then gives it more depth to understand
Life much better.
A poet indulges faith
Spirituality is defined for a unified knowledge
For poets... God is their light
Their indulgence in love.
A magnificent tribute, Susan -- is there anything you can't write about and make it real? I so admire your talents and aspire to write as well.
Love,
CJ
God is their light, and LOVE their indulgence, AWESOME and oh so true. The key is to be lookin to our Father God, not all the little god's of this planet. great write, Art
A glittering work of literary art to sit like a veritable crown on the memory of one of the great masters of the verb. An exceptonal tribute and a tremendously accomplished work in its own right.
Aberjhani
I l o v e Robert Frost; one of my favorite poets of all time, you do him justice in this beautiful tribute. (My fave poem of his is "Out--Out--") Well done!
I have one of his masterful quotes on my bio-page.
Belle ... this was a poignant reminder of our blessed predessors and the influence, and expertise, they brought to a very arcane craft, misunderstood by too many and embraced by too few.
I've often taken the road less travelled, though not in all things, perhaps I've still a lesson or two to learn from him. Excellent tribute to a most profound poet. Pierre.
Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2006
~~Susan~~"Two Tramps In Mud Time"...my favorite..wonderful poem about a classic man~~
Can't recall any of Frost's poems. Will have to look them up tomorrow to get a better understanding of this poem. Each poet has an outlook on life that one can agree with or disagree and love is certainly in every poets vocabulary.
Susan ,you outdid yourself with this tribute/poem!Robert would have defrosted had he read it! You can write anything and it's superb ms wordsmith! Still keeping Kate and everything in prayer.
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2006
Susan,
Wonderful tribute to an American poet laurate and to the soul of poets everywhere. Yes,God blesses us all with the poet's verse.
I loved him, too, and now, I love his work, for it is imortal.
Other than that line, I will say this to your lines of perfection for this great poet, man, and American: I SECOND the COMMOTION ! ! !
- Bill
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2006
Precious Sis ((Susan )), God the imagery that comes from your muse is extraordinarily beautiful~~ Some have it in this world for several kinds of writing ..Some don't know how to write..You have the gift...I say a soul has to peel the layers of the soul to get to the limb out on the tree..The furnace of affliction did my soul good, for it molded me like the potter carved my diamond of my soul..Excelent imagery. Out standing.. I am still in complete intercession for you and your precious mom, healing, blessings~~~
Welcome!
The poems in this beautifully bound book are a result of over twenty years of observations. Observations of the world around us and on the telecommunications network. All of the hate, love, heroism, disasters, and those who help.
Beautif
Love,
CJ
Aberjhani
Ron
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your poetically challenged friend, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Very well penned; brava!
I l o v e Robert Frost; one of my favorite poets of all time, you do him justice in this beautiful tribute. (My fave poem of his is "Out--Out--") Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I have one of his masterful quotes on my bio-page.
Belle ... this was a poignant reminder of our blessed predessors and the influence, and expertise, they brought to a very arcane craft, misunderstood by too many and embraced by too few.
Kudos ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
One of my favorite poets...Robert Frost
Now there was a man of extraordinary vision and intellect..
Still got your Mom on the Prayer Boards..
Love
Peter
Fee
~~martin~~
...."Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference" R.Frost
the-powers-that-be distribute "poet souls"...
Peace, Love & Light,
Carolyn
Love,
Eileen
Wonderful tribute to an American poet laurate and to the soul of poets everywhere. Yes,God blesses us all with the poet's verse.
LL*
Other than that line, I will say this to your lines of perfection for this great poet, man, and American: I SECOND the COMMOTION ! ! !
- Bill
Love To You, Dove