I'd like to say that I'm at ease, my comfort speaks in sighs
I'd like to sit and warm my form with visions of your eyes
I'd see the play of oceans; the waves of lifetimes spent
In deepened art emotion and palettes...rainbows sent
I'd see the pain and sorrow...reflected in the years
I'd spy into tomorrow...choke back the love and tears
I'd search for the pathways that'd give my thoughts to you
I'd relish all the singing from deeper love so true
I'd hold to all the happiness that fate has given thee
I'd be the one holding you there...as strong as an oak tree
I'd realize the dreams were real and right before your eyes
I'd kiss your lids , your nose, your lips and seal it with my sighs.
God's thoughts pre-born? Sounds beautiful. Lulls the mind in a whimsy grey dream and your picture to accompany it is spot on. Beautiful write. The best I've read on the Den today.
This is beautiful, absolutly beautiful,
I think the best compliment that one poem can give another is to readd their work and genuinly wish that you had written it yourself and with that thought in mind, I wish i had written that one.
Thank you for sharing it.
Steve
Susan this takes my breath away! It is so perfectly beautifully written I can't think of enough to say how much I love it! I agree with the others, this is your genre, brava!
This is an absolutely beautiful romance write that will capture hearts mine included as it is read. Very sweet and endearing write with just a touch of pining and yearning for what could or should have been.
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
(Self-published. Please contact author directly to order.)
Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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Ron
Love, Taylor
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I think the best compliment that one poem can give another is to readd their work and genuinly wish that you had written it yourself and with that thought in mind, I wish i had written that one.
Thank you for sharing it.
Steve
love Tinka
ET
Elizabeth
I think Richard, and in particular Fee have said it all for me..
The barely concealed yearning and desire is palpable in this scintillating write..
Love and Light
Peter
Delicate and loving words... capturing he heart. Good stuff !
- Bill
Love,
Dove
My heart melted indeed, and I agree with Felix - this will capture the hearts of the readers.
Such a heart you possess, and such a gift you have for expressing what flows through that heart. You have my respect Susan.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Fee