Would It? (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

A beautiful write.. Did the kiss help?,........M

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 14, 2007

A rhetorical question. It would if the receiver was open to the prospect. Some aren't. Some like it hot.

Ron

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on April 12, 2007

This is how I've allways wanted someone to feel about me, and such a beautiful write. Love Pierre.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on April 12, 2007

Great question to ask one in need. Well penned

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

This is a lovely piece Susan. I like the intimacy and the affection you convey here in a way that only a Southern Gal could! I also love the picture you chose to accompany the poem. Wormsloe is one of my favorite places in Savannah. Well done!
~Butch

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

C'mere! I'm not pouting..... just puckering up!
This is one of your best. Shorter ones take more work, but are worth every minute and hour. - Bill

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Ooo, Susan, this is lovely. This is romantic, yet wistful -- a perfect mix of both. Well done!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Me Too (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Probably . . . Your words . . . Your words . . .

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Susan your writes whether about love or about your homeland all have one thing in common and that is such a romantic, sublime sensuality that stirs the heart, minds and bodies of your fans. this one is no exception and I love the desire you show to care and take away the sadness of others. Well done dearest friend.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

TOO BLOODY RIGHT!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

short and masterful
loved it Susan

Love & peace
William

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Exquisite poem! It can't help but change it, Susan!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Susan,

One doesn't know unless they try. :) This is beautiful, tender passion to soothe the soul. Well done (and I love that pic).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

A loving view of thought, your words ease the pain even without touch, one can only imagine the soothing and healing of this expression within your poem....

a nice work.....

enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

I love this, Susan.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

This is beautiful :O) a very beautiful poem, sooooper! Nicky x

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

i can't see how it couldn't, Susan ... a loving and moving expression of the closeness of your heart, easing the sadness of your muse ...

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Let's hope it would ease the sadness and turn on a smile, but one never knows with the sad and depressed whether they will get it.

Thanks Susan,
~D.