Serendipitous Luck (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 24, 2008

Luck is serendipitous. I think your point here is that we can make our luck bright or gray, depending upon how we think about it.

Ron

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

I like 'loving in the wind'. Something there. Cheers

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

very nice poetry

Reviewed by rite

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Deep feelings and thoughts reflecting the immense complexity of life are in the foundation of these words. There are so many things we would like to deal with in ways different than situations allow us to do. And life will become more complex still. But also deep inside of us there is this undying spark of hope, seemingly insignificant, but more powerful than the sun, that will allow us to continue existence in better places and times from where we may one time look back upon this life understanding each and every event that took place in it. I see those times in my mind's eye already and quite often I long for them. For the reasons described in your poem too. Stay strong, precious soul, and keep writing from your wonderful, creative talent. Take care,

Chris

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

absolutely a beautiful write Susan
My idea of what poetry should be all about
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Very nice poem Susan, I especially like the last three lines, so meaningful.

Axilea

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Lovely offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Cool lines, unusually short for you and Serendipity too! Plus I'm for Pisces Poets too - I'm one (have to read that)