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I Love You...she shouted
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"I love you"..her words echoed
As he turned around
"I love you", she said once again
He never made a sound

"I LOVE YOU"... and her heart did break
"I NEED YOU", and she moaned
"I WANT YOU"...and she came apart
She sunk.... then he was gone

He never made a mortal sound
Upon this shrouded coast
Her crinnolins folded with her heart
Her man, her love...his ghost

She comes to search each misted morn
She swears her vows to him
She aches and dies each time he fades
Goes home, then comes again

He left her standing here you see
Eternally to wait
"I love you" quiet..in whispers now
Biding is her fate

For lovers make this mortal vow
Then hearts get torn apart
When fate steps in and weilds the sword
And severs loving hearts.

And so she wanders along the coast
Each morning with the mist
She says "I LOVE YOU' and she sighs
Then blows the fog a kiss.

© Susan K. Rowse


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There are ghosts here in the south. I feel the energies they left behind sometime.

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 Reviews of "I Love You...she shouted"
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on January 19, 2003
you are right,here and everywhere....i like the ache and longing here...and yes, i have kissed the mist.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 19, 2003
when the fog is lifted the kiss will return...

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on January 19, 2003
great piece..

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2003
Oh, my.. This is very hard to walk away from.. it's enchantingly melancholy..it allows me to indulge myself in heavy sighs and brings me to my 'weepy' side.. This could so easily have spilled over into melodrama, yet you have kept it beautifully in the realm of simply great poetry. katy.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Smith
Reviewed on January 19, 2003
Very good! Love never leaves us...just sometimes we can't feel it. You write beautifully. God bless!
Love,
Beth

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2003
I knew I was feeling strange, but I didn't know why till I read your comment on Erin's
last posting. It is that dam Wolf Moon torturing me again. It has brought me here to come and get you. See, I didn't leave
... here I am, but not as the gentle lover who left. I learned to many evil things and had to many woman while I was gone. They lured me into their den to sup and dine on them. Now as Wolf Man I grab and make you mine with the bite of the snake.
Sort of crazy huh. That is why I am a genius and just your type. Stop fooling around with mortals. I am the greatest lover, except for the fact that my fur will be a little rough on you skin. Take that.
Bill Murray

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on January 18, 2003
Very nice Susan, I liked this.
Jack


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