I am a weathered soul they say, from centuries before
I've been a part of everyone and sobbed through senseless wars
Been mired within your sorrow,stillborn within my fears
I've seen the world change each time and more and more the years
Have added up to sameness with likened old worn souls
They interchange through timeless space mere seconds, still "On
Hold'
I wonder of my purpose, where are the answers found?
The answers all you try to give is gracious but earth bound
I know, for instance, that your spirit, perception....and religion
Is all the same in relevance ... call it intuition
I feel your wishes and destain, I see inside your dreams
Those times when eyes say everything ....I'm in your heart it seems
I sense tomorrow and your smiles.... I taste the salt of tears
I've worn your shoes a thousand times ... through years and years and
years
Spirits live inside us all their whisper beckons others
Then energies connect each one brother unto brother
Hearts are lifted light as air or weighted down with rocks
Can't take being all couped up then think outside the box
Greet your angel ...connect the energies...listen from inside
Know that hope and faith are housed deep within life's ride
Your spirit is as old as mine but not too obligated
If I can recall my past forms opt for a choice then take it
I'd dwell with centuries logic bound with knowledge beyond years
While you draw back and stunt your growth with doubt and senseless
fears
Susan,
Greet your angel ...connect the energies...listen from inside
Know that hope and faith are housed deep within life's ride "
Excellent write.
Peggy
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
WOW... I'm left speechless. Teresa
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
The ending is final and hte beginning is interesting the middle holds up and the poem is delightful oh and thanks for those fantastic comments m'lady
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Very beautifully versed Susan. the words are gems indeed!!!
Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Hi Sue, I love your poetry. It is Grade A.
I also like to read Chris because he loves you so.
Friends 2U Both
tony
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
"...Spirits live inside us all their whisper beckons others
Then energies connect each one brother unto brother
Hearts are lifted light as air or weighted down with rocks
Can't take being all couped up then think outside the box..."
Ahhh, that 'dem box Susan. And so many have such tiny ones. Well done.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Superb. Have you ever read The Wandering Jew? I sense some of that influence. Maybe not.
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Greet your angel ...connect the energies...listen from inside
Know that hope and faith are housed deep within life's ride "
Excellent write.
Peggy
Love from India - Joel -
I also like to read Chris because he loves you so.
Friends 2U Both
tony
Then energies connect each one brother unto brother
Hearts are lifted light as air or weighted down with rocks
Can't take being all couped up then think outside the box..."
Ahhh, that 'dem box Susan. And so many have such tiny ones. Well done.