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Submission
by Brittany Renée → (All Poetry by Brittany Renée)
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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Deftly singing sweet intoxications softly impelling souls to soar. Hearts implode; immortal complications, daring one to live for much more. Breathless skies bequeath unknown elation raining mists of soulless lovers. Mountains kiss Heaven in celebration as hopeless faith falls to hover. Champagne skin emits smoky transfixion dulling air too sharp to inhale. Pleasing lips curve to tales of a vixen, eyes glisten; start of fairy tales. Pleading quivers, enciting omission fear falls in laps of desire. Ripened love, sweetly in full submission naïve love fulfilled by fire. (c) Brittany Renee 2005

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 8, 2005

Would that I could feel the elation elicited in your beautiful verses here, Brittany Renée. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on May 7, 2005

Great description and weaving complex words into your rhyme. J.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Hey Brittany!
I love the poem! You are so
descriptive! I was "right along"
with you too while reading it!

Nice to have you back!
I have missed you!
Sorry I have not written you in awhile.
Bek Lang

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Superb imagery in this little gem Brittany.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Excellent rhyme Brittany ... great to see your work here again!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

Original and lovely Brittany! Good to read you again!

Eileen-Alrisha

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

glad to see your wonderful imagery again ...

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

Excellent write,
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

Good write!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

A superb write ...Brittany

William ....Peace

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

super Brit, enjd your touch. G

Reviewed by Jim Howell

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

Very good write; evocative and compelling

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

Where have you been, Brittany? It is so wonderful to read you again. This is a beautiful poem! Welcome back to the Den.
Take care,
Sherry

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