This Is All I Ask (poem) by TONY MIKE NERONE on AuthorsDen

This Is All I Ask
by TONY MIKE NERONE → (All Poetry by TONY MIKE NERONE)
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As my final times draw near I begin to think what is next?
It was meant by me to capture the rapture of love Now there is no more love affairs A concubine is always a possibility But as my time draws near, I want true love As the days pass quickly I think of the obvious What is it like to be dead It is not an unusual happening There are so many people in cavities of death I know I am friends with many whom are there Or maybe it is like the non-believers think You die and sleep forever more If that happens, that is extremely sad It has the pluses of never to be lonely again All the pain and discomfort I feel will be gone I maybe can see my Father again We could talk about sports like we used to Maybe I can be with Beverly again I can feel her soft touch of her magnificent body Maybe I can walk outside again and greet all my past friends Maybe the Lord will have pity on me And give me a shot of happiness at last That is all I ask from you Dear Lord TONY MIKE NERONE 10-14-10

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

A EMOTIONAL PLEA TO OUR HEAVENLY FATHER...FOR DEATH, BUT INSTEAD HE HAS GIVEN YOU ANOTHER DAY OF LIFE...WHICH MEANS...HE WANTS YOU ON EARTH, TONY. I PRAY FOR HIS PRESENCE TO ENFUSE YOU, ALLOWING YOU TO 'FEEL' HIS PEACE AND HIS LOVE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 15, 2010

methinks we all have similar thoughts Tony,
thank you for sharing yours,so well.

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

May you have the love you have wished for Tony. Beautiful and honest pen.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

It is in such depths of thought
inquiring the finality of our lives
death can be a gift as it can be a wound
leaving loved ones to be rejoined with more loved ones
is how I perceive...then again we may be rebirthed
to try again and get everything right?
maybe we are just a game of the gods for amusements?
so many ways to see existence
but one things is global I think
there is such spiritual depths to al of us
no matter the truths of the religions we worship
we all are of love...
Love's Bounty & Blessing
Vickie

Reviewed by Chijike Ndukwu

Reviewed on October 14, 2010

I so do my friend. I think like this too. Sometimes its sad to think of it but we have no choice at all. This takes back to thought.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Prayer like piece that says even more between the lines. You are still part of the living, walk in the light and smile...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Nicely written, Tony.

Reviewed by pat medlin

your mind like a majestic monarch gliding from one flower of thought to another...nice write

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

'cavities of death' my favourite bit, bloody good stuff.