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Still Work To Be Done
by TONY MIKE NERONE → (All Poetry by TONY MIKE NERONE)
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An unusual rhyme.

Hey there pretty lady, are you looking at me

There is nothing else in this part of the room but I, standing near the big potted tree

If I approach you will you wait for me to arrive

My eyes are locked on to you how can you escape my drive

Yes my Dear Lady I have returned

As free as a bird only in this large urn

It was not supposed to be this way

But I had nothing to say

I am dead and cremated

My ashes to be scattered with the under rated

I had a good life the last eight years were fair and bright

Now I sit in this urn so mellow, a scary sight

I hope the Lord saves my soul

Everything is in his control

Good bye hazel eyes

I must go to the one who cries

A long life full of naught

Still has promise to be of spiritual thought 


Tony Mike Nerone

03-09=11
 
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 Reviews of "Still Work To Be Done"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on March 24, 2011
A mix of emotions are felt through your words. It reads as if you are watching this unfold before your eyes. ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on March 22, 2011
I agree with Paul.
Best wishes
from
kay
Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
Very well written, Tony
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on March 11, 2011
WOW! Awesome, xxxxx
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
TONY...YOU ARE ONE GREAT POET. I AM STILL LAUGHING. THIS UNIQUE WORK IS WONDERFUL AND WAS ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Oh my..wonderful writing sweet man..never give up on your heart...sighhh...stay safe and well Hugsss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
In one way it is kind of sad, but in another it reflects the promise of eternal life, well said...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
I don't know Tony, I think the potted tree might have a "larger" draw for her, you know what I mean, thicker in the trunk and all that...;-)e
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Tony, so fun to read your words! Morgan
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
This pulls me to and fro, Tony,
and i admire the originality of it so much.
Very fine indeed.

John
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Ah, now this is original and sure gave me a new perspective to reflect on~
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Nice style!
Choose light and joy Tony!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Yes, Brother Tony. Cling to that hope.
God bless,
Lew
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Neat idea indeed.
Writing does inspire us.

John
Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Wow! This is another perspective for sure. Well done!
Blessings,

John Michael
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Well done, Tony.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Thought-provoking words, Tony. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 9, 2011
Nicely done Tony
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