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In Hell
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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If I wake up in hell,
earth prepared me for the trail.
I know why I ended up here,
so its too late to care.
What if I destroyed hell,
can I fail?


In my mind hell doesn't exist,
hell is this earth with a twist.
To me there's only God & heaven,
three sixes add one equal seven.
I'm doing my hell time now,
this is why I have to eat the cow.


The cow is good eating,
so some of this hell is treating.
God also left a Holy book,
had a little mercy in hells nook.
The only way out of this hell,
is deaths final spell.


Since I'm already bound,
I'm going to enjoy being down.
Our loving God understands,
what I create with these hands.
This hell is suppose to defeat us,
turn around and delete us.


I stand defeated,
waiting to be totally deleted.
Until this occurs to me,
this hell will keep me.
God controls my fate,
for me its too late,
already inside
hells gate.


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 Reviews of "In Hell"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 13, 2004
Powerful write Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2004
Ok Grady...I get the point..You believe the way
you want to believe and that is fine friend..
we all have freedom of choices...as for me...I do
believe there is a physical hell....its satans home..
you take care of you sweet friend...in whatever way
you know how to do that...bless you...floria
Oh almost forgot...I liked the poem...:)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on April 13, 2004
Whew, you tell em! Very interesting, creative and entertaining poem, Grady!
"The cow is good eating,
so some of this hell is treating.
God also left a Holy book,
had a little mercy in hells nook."

Reviewed on April 13, 2004
Grady, The hell with it... Go out and have a good time! See you there!!

...Michael

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2004
One hell of a write...


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