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BetOnAStar
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Got our bet on a star,
when we still die in a car,
get drunk at the bar.
With all the drinking,
no one straight thinking,
some evil inking,
our EARTH home is sinking.


Star bets are fine,
priority should be a focused mind.
Up in the sky,
wondering why,
down on earth we die.
Wars, shooting and killing,
should make a star less appealing.


My bets on the ground,
where we all walk around.
There may be more peace afar,
but we all can't get there in a car.
Not enough room in a spaceship,
for everyone to make the trip.


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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
sometimes i wish i could just float among the stars and leave this evil world! enjoyed this write, grady; thanks for sharing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
If I could go to another star to live my life I would. The earth is getting uglier everyday. Good write, Grady.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Sometimes we wish for that spaceship journey. Enjoyed this, Grady.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
I truly believe that our Earth Home is sinking. Makes one think - flee, fight, or fix. Hope we can fix, before it's too late.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Excellent write Poet. We either better start taking care of each other or build a bigger spaceship.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Excellent write Grady!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 23, 2004
Great write! Well Grady, you may have a good point, but I always feel so at home among the stars;-)
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