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WeakOnThePlease
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Weak on the please,
 fall on the knees.
A broken leg,
rather than beg.
None like the plead,
so grows the weed.


Begging just isn't cool,
even as a last ditch tool.
Please excuse me,
don't confuse thee.
A step on the toe,
an accidental blow.


Cross anothers path,
so flows the rath.
So many excuses,
life sin abuses.
Very seldom knees,
nice to say please,
lessen the degrees.
Big flame rant,
Life on a slant,
Slide down a hill,
doped on pill.
Wrecked in car,
drinking in bar,
wishing on a star,
No who you are.


Hanging in the trees,
blocking the breeze,
no worn kness,
less so please,
catch no disease,
ice so freeze.


Depends,
defends,
life so sins,
fun no grins,
around due,
got no stew,
where's d beef,
roast on a reef,
need in relief,
even so trick,
finger up flick.


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 Reviews of "WeakOnThePlease"
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
I like this a lot, Grady! Wonderful choice of words!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Swing on the tree Grady.....thats more fun!!

Call out loud "Tinka says: "Good morning to the World"!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
More great word play. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Too many good verses in there to pick out a favorite one. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Good one Grady, "slide down a hill"
heh heh...I know all about that one,
and no one there to pick you up :(
good write. hugs...floria


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