Should we drop it right away, or wait until we think about our prey, the bombs ability to slay, maybe hurt or help our play. The bomb can be very distructive, in love very seductive. In war the bomb totally destroys, in love the blast affectionately deploys.
"I love you," is a bomb, it can freeze a heart numb. "I hate you," is also a blast, it can cause the opposite in contrast. In love and war, dropping bombs will scar.
A phony love bomb dropped, maybe should be stopped. It could blast a heart, totally apart. Leaving nothing but pain, shattered life insane.
This is my first chance to read your work - wow am I glad I did!
I love the connection you've made between war and love.....not so dissimilar after all, are they? There's a fine line between love and hate and this poem speaks to that.
Well done.
~Rose~
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2004
It's a bombshell. :) We must always maintain our sense of humor. Keep the faith. Excellent.
Yes dear Grady you got this one perfected
"A phony love bomb dropped,
maybe should be stopped.
It could blast a heart,
totally apart.
Leaving nothing but pain,
shattered life insane.
Take care while I am gone and keep an eye on all my loved ones at AD okay!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2004
You are so right Grady, a heart is nothing to play with.
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The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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This is my first chance to read your work - wow am I glad I did!
I love the connection you've made between war and love.....not so dissimilar after all, are they? There's a fine line between love and hate and this poem speaks to that.
Well done.
~Rose~
"A phony love bomb dropped,
maybe should be stopped.
It could blast a heart,
totally apart.
Leaving nothing but pain,
shattered life insane.
Take care while I am gone and keep an eye on all my loved ones at AD okay!!
Love Tinka
Mucho wisdom today Sir Grady!