Reading, writing and poeming, will get a brain to storming. The love of it all, will certainly enthral. Words red on a page, could incite joy or rage. Words inked out of love of writing, could cause many to be exciting, others to fly birds of say fighting.
Variety is said to be the spice, so we should all be nice, read and word together throw rice, not sticks and stones, that break other bones. Different opinions expressed, maybe anothers life, word pressed, simply down stressed.
With so many different minds, and experiences of all kinds, everyone should unload the mines. Live and let live, enjoy what others have to give. Or simply be supporting, instead of hate distorting.
More wonderful poetic wisdom from the The Grady Man!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2004
Excellent Grady.
"With so many different minds,
and experiences of all kinds,
everyone should unload the mines.
Live and let live,
enjoy what others have to give.
Or simply be supporting,
instead of hate distorting.
The first thing that caught my eye was the word " poeming". " That is not a word ",thought I, " but it should be. " Poetry is an action, just as writing as an action, but where we have the verb to write there is no purpose to poem for the related but significantly different activity of writing poetry.
Which is not what your poem is actually about. Your topic is important. We all serve the muse in our own fashion. Poetry is as varied as the faces of the people passed in the streets each day. Your poem is an eloquent statement of that fact.
Well done!
john+
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2004
You are scribing some wisdom packed poems lately...BRILLIANT work, Grady!
Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2004
This is excellent advice in poetic form and it's very true.
Grady, another philosopher that AD has spawned, herein showing his great abilities to "enthral"! I enjoyed this no end, and have read it several times getting the feel of a wonderful write...Peace thru Words, Ed & Rufuz
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"With so many different minds,
and experiences of all kinds,
everyone should unload the mines.
Live and let live,
enjoy what others have to give.
Or simply be supporting,
instead of hate distorting.
Word!"
Postive....
my three favorite things to do :)
and you did this so well! love your word "poeming"
"what are you doing?" "oh, just poeming" *grins* seriously, i love it
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
The first thing that caught my eye was the word " poeming". " That is not a word ",thought I, " but it should be. " Poetry is an action, just as writing as an action, but where we have the verb to write there is no purpose to poem for the related but significantly different activity of writing poetry.
Which is not what your poem is actually about. Your topic is important. We all serve the muse in our own fashion. Poetry is as varied as the faces of the people passed in the streets each day. Your poem is an eloquent statement of that fact.
Well done!
john+
This is excellent advice in poetic form and it's very true.
Patty
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