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Wrong With You!
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Everyone has something wrong with them. Some face it and move on, others don't and live in denial. The mirrors there waiting.

Suppose to be something wrong,
when you've been here long.
Even the young,
can end up on a rope strung.
We're lucky if we make it whole,
only to be buried later in a hole.


Look at some of the priest,
holy ones you think of least.
Even this world is messed up,
quite a lot of it is corrupt.
Nothing is perfect abound,
sooner or later everthing
ends up ground.


Those who feel superior,
feel like nothing about
them is inferior,
got my vote,
hope they can continue to float.
I admit something
is wrong with me,
it's my way of setting my soul free.
My strong side can better protect,
my weakside needing correct.
Don't too much surprise my eyes,
nor can it slip up to surprise.
Strong side on guard,
like big dog in a yard.


Balance

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 Reviews of "Wrong With You!"
Reviewed by Mary Hence (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2004
Balancing of one's soul is good for the heart.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 14, 2004
Well written Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 14, 2004
Many truly do live in denial, unfortunately; and we all truly do need the balance you so wisely speak of, Grady.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2004
Those who expect perfection are going to be very disappointed in themselves and others, good poem Grady.


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