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by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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What would I do,
if love didn't shine through?
What would I say,
if it totally went away?
How would I cope,
without loves hope?


Love I do,
hate I don't,
my heart and soul won't.
If I do,
life would be blue.
Really hard to do,
letting love shine through.


Some do,
let hate color hue.
The shade is blue,
no matter what we do.
If we let love do,
joy shines through,
it's helps us renew.


G


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 Reviews of "do"
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
(((Grady)))

Excellent message, as always, in your own unique style that I have come to love! Well done, G-Man; BRAVO!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
I think Eileen said it all!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
Nicely done, G.

I've missed reading your lighthearted work.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 17, 2005
True blue whoo hoo. I can relate, Grady. Yeah. Stick with love, bro. Love you and this poem. Your friend from BC, Canada. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 17, 2005
Hate feeds hate, just as love feeds love.It should be evident to us that love is superior to hate,and much better for us in every way. so why waste our energy hating! Excellent poem G!

Eileen

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on April 17, 2005
Well put, G., and doubtless true.

Thanks
Gina

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on April 17, 2005
My second novel is entitled BJOYFL...inspired by a vanity plate...kind of the same theme of this poem about letting love do...very nice

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 17, 2005
a very important message in this poem, Grady ...

Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on April 17, 2005
Good message. Well done. Henry

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 17, 2005
I couldn't have said it better myself, Grady. Hate just breeds more negativity and harms only the one who is doing the hating. Excellent poem and message.
Take care,
Sherry


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