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the Chin
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Some of us stand and take it on the chin. Others try to duck, dodge and evade. Even though I've been knocked out by life, I'm ok.

Hardly anyone wants to
take it on the chin,
even me amoung all men.
Most of us want it easy to heart,
when actually life is pretty hard.
I wish for millions in the lotto,
when taking it on the chin
is part of my motto.


Hard life is all I ever knew,
even before I learned to chew.
Nothing ever came that easy,
but life negative and sleazy.
Being a good person takes guts,
life has many negative ruts.
We get stuck in,
over and over again.
Some break out,
then take a more positive route.
Most of us have vices,
we get stuck in the ices.
Frozen stiff,
might get out if.


Up in these old years,
my chin has faced most of my fears.
I stood and took the blows,
the Lord only knows.
No one knows that
I've been floored,
knocked clean the freak out,
but I got up swinging,
even though my head was ringing.


Now I have on a chin guard,
for the blows that still come hard.
Hard to keep a good man down,
so I must be on the ground.
Everyday I try to rise,
life deals a new surprise.


G


 



 
 


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 Reviews of "the Chin"
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
You are such a good and strong man Grady, I like the way you think and write, this is excellent and so true!

Reindeer

Reviewed on January 16, 2006
God has truly made you strong through what ever you have been through in this world. We must take the blows and be blessed or it in the end. God sees all and knows all but we must hold fast my fellow poet. Yes we have to take the knock downs and bruises in life but we must give all the hurt, pain and dissappointments to God. Some of us are favoured by God that is why we must go through things so we can be strong hrough it all. No weapon formed shall prosper for we all more than conquerers. You are a child of God and i felt your strength in this poem. God loves you and so do I.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Yes life is hard, but within this you have found the strength :-) Great write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Well said Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on January 16, 2006
excellent write, grady; always the perennial wise man. and you ARE that, my friend! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D

happy martin luther king jr. day to you! may we always remember him and his legacy for peace and nonviolence! :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Excellent example set on how to overcome hardships.
Keep writing Grady!

Eileen


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